Man's Immortal Sculpture Poem by omar ibrahim

Ohh myy such a great poem omar! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++10! ! ! ! !

definitely a must read!

To carve the hardest stone you need great might You must be patient if for God you yearn That's why on scenic sculptures they shed light at ur young age u hve so much of wisdom in you and naturally in u r poems. wonderful indeed. thank u for inviting me.

Nicely set into the lines of thought. You did well on this. I love that it brings pictures and thoughts to mind while reading it. Thank you for sharing. Deborah

bravo my friend... perfect theme... perfect lines! wow... you amazed me again! nice thoughts here... rated it 10

An interesting attempt at the set form and a reminder just how difficult it can be to both rhyme and make sense. The line 'No wave can crush a stone enclosed with bog.' is most interesting, as it seems to be saying, to paraphrase, carve your name on a stone, encase it in mucky ground and no wave will break it. A stone 'that have no stain' would soon pick a few up from a bog!

Very creative & deep.

Reflective and well written.

A mature poem. Great imagery wth deep content.Well done! ; D

Nicely written poem. Keep writing and sharing. As a young lad what do you think of my poems.?