Robert Roberts
Anse La Raye, St. Lucia

A New Start

Rating: 4.3
The water licked down my back
as it gave birth to the purity
of a new year it aided the love
and tears the pain and fears
that i over came
it 3am in the morning
and a new year dawn on me
a new day lit up under
the moon lit horizon
eyes watered up as i try
to write.
The sky gave up
the playground and
all was needed
was the players
standing tall with
my back to last year
i walked out of
the dark and into
the light of a new era
shadows cast over my world
keeps the adrenaline in me running
as my momentum begins to flow
goals to be achieved as the slate
is wiped clean as
i start over again
Sunday, January 1, 2012
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COMMENTS
Shaun Cronick 01 April 2020
Congratulations on being chosen with this fine poem. Truly deserved and thank you for writing and sharing. I wish you the best this life has to offer. Take care and the loved ones around you.
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Lyn Paul 01 April 2020
The adrenaline can achieve great things particularly in sport. Especially With the crowds excitement for the game. Thank you. Sorry your poem has been criticised by someone uninterested in PH just someone who needs to find his own way in life.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2020
as my momentum begins to flow goals to be achieved as the slate is wiped clean as i start over again...... touching inscription with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day for third time
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Chinedu Dike 01 April 2020
Well expressed thoughts and feelings on the New Year resolution. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
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Mahtab Bangalee 01 April 2020
Beautiful poem penned on the new year and it's changing resolution..congrats for being selected this poem as POD
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Somali Mukherjee 01 April 2020
Congratulations on being the poem of the day. Thank you for sharing such a nice poem.
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 April 2020
The water licked down my back as it gave birth to the purity of a new year it aided the love and tears the pain and fears.. very poetic are you dear poet. fine. thank u. tony
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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 April 2019
Congrats on poem of the Day.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 April 2019
" Momentum begins to flow" ., Excellent expressions. Congrats on poem of the Day.
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Michael Morris 01 April 2019
This poem definitely needs A NEW START and A COMPLETE REWRITE!
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