A Niche For Me In Your Heart Poem by Rani Turton

A Niche For Me In Your Heart

Rating: 3.3


If you have some place
Some place you could well spare
Make a niche for me in your heart
To warm me within your space
I will never, never depart.

I will be more than a name and face
If you could grant me this grace
I would be more than a queen
To live in this honoured place
I would be part of your present
Not a part of your past
If only time would linger on
And make this dream last and last.

A silly poem it seems
But then, so are many dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 08 July 2008

its thruogh dreams we realise what we long for, a sweetlove poem, expressing the longing for a loved one.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 May 2008

how i wish you could be in my heart rani. excellent piece.

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Onelia Avelar 17 May 2008

A very very cosy warm niche in someones heart you just built, Rani. Nice imagery of a nice weird place for living, while we love someone.

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Lynda Robson 16 May 2008

This is so sweet Rani, written from your heart, thank you Lynda xx

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 16 May 2008

All poetry are mostly product of imagery.This one too is good combination of imagination, words and emotions.Not at silly.good one

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Adeline Foster 02 September 2011

Enjoy the way you write. I am sure you would like mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - Adeline

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Ravinder Malhotra 06 December 2009

Mercifully there are poets who write something that has substance and emotion adnd their poetry can be enjoyed. How do we at 'Poets of Delhi' invite you to our readings? .

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Meggie Gultiano 25 July 2009

I would be part of your present....I love this line, Rani. And mind you, this is not a silly piece.This comes from a very loving and sweet heart.. Hugs from here, Meggie

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Indira Babbellapati 16 January 2009

silliness renders more sweetness once one is in love...

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Sílvia Oliveira 08 July 2008

Dear Rani, I do like this one of yours! It touches my heart! Congrats from Brasil! Sílvia

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