If you have some place
Some place you could well spare
Make a niche for me in your heart
To warm me within your space
I will never, never depart.
I will be more than a name and face
If you could grant me this grace
I would be more than a queen
To live in this honoured place
I would be part of your present
Not a part of your past
If only time would linger on
And make this dream last and last.
A silly poem it seems
But then, so are many dreams.
how i wish you could be in my heart rani. excellent piece.
A very very cosy warm niche in someones heart you just built, Rani. Nice imagery of a nice weird place for living, while we love someone.
This is so sweet Rani, written from your heart, thank you Lynda xx
All poetry are mostly product of imagery.This one too is good combination of imagination, words and emotions.Not at silly.good one
Enjoy the way you write. I am sure you would like mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - Adeline
Mercifully there are poets who write something that has substance and emotion adnd their poetry can be enjoyed. How do we at 'Poets of Delhi' invite you to our readings? .
I would be part of your present....I love this line, Rani. And mind you, this is not a silly piece.This comes from a very loving and sweet heart.. Hugs from here, Meggie
silliness renders more sweetness once one is in love...
Dear Rani, I do like this one of yours! It touches my heart! Congrats from Brasil! Sílvia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its thruogh dreams we realise what we long for, a sweetlove poem, expressing the longing for a loved one.