A Pain Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Good poem I like it... you should read and comment on my few poems about suffering, pain, and depression.

A real decent piece and my favourite line is (Everything happens patiently) thank you for sharing... Karen :)

good nicely written.....

pain which is noise less and everybody will face without any noise

I love the poem, but I hate rhming in genral. you have a very on point yet fragmnted way of saying thisngs. it makes your poems a very interesting and a bit challenging to read, whic is really good in my books.

Meaningful piece...10.

lovely........! ! ! ! ! ! ! : D

Tree of forest and street Free at one lonely at another.

Great poem, nice choice of words

Blood and breath, life and death yes that's the real life my friend! ! 1 Good poem i like it!