A Need I Need Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s
A Need I Need
For instance, I open my doors
Give you reasons for why
Why I need you
No measure for stances
No measure for reasons
I be in your stances
Working with circumstances.
I haltin dark, with
Pursuing the darkness of your light
You are a need as the space
The space between you and me.
I get cold in summer
In the absence of you for
Which I need you
I ask you for your living
The living in my living
Compare nothing, for instance
The birth of you
And death of mine.
'I be in her stances, working with circumstances'(what a line) ! ! Very nice poem Mr.Kumar!
Heartfelt love declaration? If you ask a girl's hand in marriage with this sweet poem, she'd say yes, for sure. Your living become my living. Till death do us part...
a good write I get cold in the summer in the absence of you for which I need you. nice.
very nice poem.i think ur very much passionate in writing.and i feel nice for reading it
Painted a good picture, and feel the passion in it. Good writing!
you are a need as the space, the space between you and me! what a piece very good.
last two lines brings the whole love kingdom on earth.brava!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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