that re-sounds of itself
to disturb the mind,
conflict with difference,
resulting of war torn body parts
retrospective within the writ line
that defines chaos and
spiritual devastation
Peace of Cake -
sake lit candles for all whom
thwart the self destructing
enemy with threatening ghosts that
night mare and bewitch
the insane that defy
Anti-Peace Rallies for
'Love's Human Compassion'
09.11.2008
Louie, you paint both irony of war and its supporters. I will never forget the film 'Oh What a LOvely War' with the generals conducting WW1 from Brighton Pier and how everytime a soldier died, a bright red poppy grew on the spot he fell. Thank you for writing this. Bob
A stunning piece of poetry.....I read twice....to understand the world of meaning in that compact structure...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the touch soft of your poems.. that's good writing