A Pitcher Of Old Wine And The Mysterious Girl Comments

If this poem was in quatrains you could mistake it as an excerpt from the Rubaiyat. Excellent verse with Eastern flavor.

In the pitcher of the old wine I see the poetic beauties of the classic Urdu poets and the 'SAKI' pouring the divine drinks through her intoxicating eyes and its hang over never comes to an end. CP

U hav beautifully describe your lov in a v beautiful way... I really enjoyed :)

'Loves bitter mystery', what a nice piece of work from you.Thank you for sharing it with us. Edward Kofi Louis

I loved this Khayyamesque poem. It is sheer magic!

Superb. Excellant. Congrats.But request is learn how to cover a poem with shroud. Sorry, I am not a teacher.

This poem is a very fine tale, epic lines about an universal matter. The inebriation of the wine is the same one of the girl.

beautiful. the wine -eastern damsel and you. regards anju

very very engaging piece...you seem drawn in eager just as the narrater fro the veil to be shed...sad, romantic, deep.

Dear Sadiq, Theme of the poem is simply super excellant. But you made it very narrative. Do not say everything in poetry.I liked the last part most. You could have shorten this piece to more poetic.

thank you for your comment which lead me to the first on your list of poetry - just how much of that wine were you drinking as you wrote this intoxicating piece :) ... a wonderful read. Life is too short to drink bad wine.... Thanks, Tia

Winged fancy's wonderful flight.....

Dear Sadiq, finally I got while looking for long time. Its a wonderfull piece. would you mind to read me and to say something.

something dats really nicely depicted in ur poem..

your poem is graced with beautiful metaphor...life itself is a cup...the allusions are great...deep thoughts engraved...the pitcher and cup will never be dry.....

Life is a sweet mystery, what awaits us in the next cup or from behind the veil, you never know unless your brave and follow that trail... Andrew 10