'A Poem' Poem by Pink Butterfly

'A Poem'

Rating: 5.0


I've lost my path so many times
And fell down to the ground
I've been the queen of fools
And was trapped by the weakness' sound

And then you came you find me
And picked me from the ground
You release me from the throne
And killed the weakness sound

I never lift my hands to you
But still you hold it tight
The road was dark for me
Until you gave out light

You embraced me so warmly
That my soul can barely feel
With your tender loving care
My heart has come to heal

A million thanks I offer you
For guiding and loving me
My Lord you're my saviour
The one who set me free


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 01 August 2009

Pink or yellow...with age thou shalt mellow....with love ye shall rise to glory....which you have in your story...So... Cheers. Subroto

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C. P. Sharma 01 August 2009

Great healing power of faith and trust. I loved these lines in His praise, You embraced me so warmly That my soul can barely feel With your tender loving care My heart has come to heal CP

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Ted M 03 August 2009

Lovely poem with great flow, excellent rhythm........10+++

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Shirley Woods 04 August 2009

Very simply but beautifully expressed. Thanks

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Frank Lambert 15 August 2009

H Pink Butterfly, Thought I'd dropp by after the kind review you gave me. I'm glad I did, I could see you were a caring one before and now I can Kinda see why. Cheers, Frank

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Hans Vr 22 March 2012

Beautiful touching poem.

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Azul Noir 28 July 2010

A beautiful way to give thanks.

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Kristoffer Randolf Ramos 08 April 2010

Amazingly beautiful poem, I love it

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Marvin Brato 17 February 2010

Romantic and amazing passionate piece! Thanks for sharing.

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Iron Panda 23™ 27 January 2010

this is beautiful! ! i felt at peace as i read it :)

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