Pink Butterfly

Bury Me To Eternity

Silence glow within the dark
As humility stumble with kindness
Sorrow is a malignant curse
That begins confusion and sadness

Devastated dreams and luck
Thoughts deceived by words
Intensely dropped broken hope
Pierced by countless swords

Destiny proclaims a mystery
A day so close and deep
Sun’s virtues were untold
To my ears are saved to creep

Blood rustle down my veins
Huge remorse to defeat and break
Hatred and guilt all follows
With this deep wound that you make

Relieve me now my dearest
In this tormented vanity
Give me touch of affection
And “Bury Me To Eternity”

Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 10, 2009
Poem Edited: Sunday, February 8, 2009

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (7/31/2010 8:42:00 AM)

    Bury me to eternity...it sound like fallen angel crying...You created beautiful poem, even though u decorate it with pain and put many accessories of darkness but it still make this poem as a drawing of white heart...this is good, keep writing but to bury you to eternity? this is too early, but treasure yourself save people from calamity..make this life more secure! Hopes never fade..happy always okay! .. that's good :) :)

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  • Cain XXX (6/16/2010 7:10:00 AM)

    darkly, morbidly, beautiful. thank you for sharing. :)

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (1/27/2010 9:59:00 AM)

    .....i liked this :)

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (1/14/2010 9:54:00 AM)

    well written mind opener.

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (9/1/2009 6:04:00 AM)

    Brilliantly written this poem.
    The poetic spirit is shown very well here.
    Keep coming.
    Great

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  • Aron LeleiAron Lelei (8/20/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    Such a poem tells one that if he/she could find love that is real, yes, nobody could find an empty space in the heart. Life would be still and each could bury himself/herself in his/her loves heart. It is a poem worth it. Splendidly set and written.Dearly cherished by me.

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  • Subroto Chatterjee (8/1/2009 3:33:00 AM)

    Not yet....not just yet. For that, wait till eternity....And no one will complain..
    Cheers.
    Subroto

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  • Susan Aparejo (7/31/2009 9:06:00 AM)

    thanks for your comment. I appreciate it well, Your poem is loaded with. Its sings for beauty in its expertise of being a poet. Figurative language are there too that make vivid idea in its deepest sense.

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  • Sana Rose (7/30/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    YOU have buttery choice of words...pinkYY! ! !
    I jzz melted in the heat of their strength...jzz like butter...
    You sre Poetry! ! !
    I would like to read more from you...and know you more too...

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  • Raj ArumugamRaj Arumugam (7/29/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    YOur lines are vigorous and power-packed, Pink Butterfly

    Blood rustle down my veins
    Huge remorse to defeat and break
    Hatred and guilt all follows
    With this deep wound that you make

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  • Mick LawMick Law (7/28/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    excellent very dark and worrying but so well penned. Thankyou for the comment on my Dreams od Singapore, very astute observation, hidden meanings x

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  • Wesley Mincin (7/22/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    Very good, hon. But I noticed only two poems? Write on! This was well done. I would like to see more.

    -Wes

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  • Priyanka BhowmickPriyanka Bhowmick (7/10/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    at such a small age u write so brilliantly.... i shall be waiting for more of ur poems.. :)
    good work.

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  • Jester's PJester's P (7/8/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    nice work...the poetic spirit is working...enough to be qualified to the discipline to poetry.
    like it...keep up the good work.

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (7/8/2009 7:23:00 AM)

    splendid poem..a deep thoughts with compassion...10

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  • Emily OldhamEmily Oldham (6/21/2009 5:43:00 AM)

    10+. Great title and amazing poem, one I'll read over and over again... keep writing!
    Athena

    *** words will change the world ***

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (5/11/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    feelings are welll expressed indeed..yet if you show your real love even da corner or even the autopsy man will not cut you...innermost feeelings r well expressed..see you...10+++

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (4/15/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    Magnificent poem, moving lines.10

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  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/15/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    u are truly remarkable.. beautiful write..as lovely as a pink butterfly..brilliant bravo

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  • Whitney Nicole Albright* (3/27/2009 1:03:00 PM)

    VERY ARTISTIC. WONDERFUL MIND YOU'VE GOT THERE!

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