' A Poem That Woke Me Up! ' Poem by indira babbellapati

' A Poem That Woke Me Up! '

Rating: 2.7


I dwell
In the absence
You left behind

That absence occupies me

I dabble
In the silence
You fill me with

That's my silent connect

This heart
Still sings
The moonlight sonata of yore

That silent score sustains me

My breath
Still draws in
The perfume dabbed on this skin

That silently nurtures hope in me

Every night
I bury tear for you
In my heart

That quenches my heart's thirst

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria C. Pires Costa 02 November 2011

This is a heartfelt poem indeed. An absence that has triggered beautiful lines! May hope stay with you, and may real presence flood your heart and mind with happy threads!

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Jerry Hughes 23 January 2012

...absolutely beautiful Indira, the bearing of your soul in words. Love, Jerry

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Richard Antwi 13 July 2020

I dwell In the absence You left behind These are beautiful words but gives me bad memories

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 August 2024

NOT bad memories, but an Echo of Melancholy, Sir!

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Congratulations, dear poet. This poem ranks #One among the Best Poems of Members

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Kevin Familia 19 September 2024

I should have commented on this poem before but seeing in the first spot of best member poems, makes me in awe of this poem Iove it! I hope it resonates through the ages! : )

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 August 2024

Still Most Beautiful poem, dear Poetess!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 April 2024

CONGRATULATIONS for the deep meaning of the poem, beautifully captured!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 April 2024

This is a grandest poem to my heart. Love reading this, I came across this lovely poem and I am so happy to have read this.5 Stars Full and this may become The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving!

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Rachel Purcell 10 April 2024

I know the feelings. Beautifully put. Great job.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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