My love for you is a boundless ocean
But the world can only see drops of it,
My feelings about you flow incessantly
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A very beautiful and heart touching poem. Also, well penned and full of emotions! Love it! Keep it up! 10+++Love and Peace...
Wow! Beautiful expression of emotions that the world can never fathom... Well written.
Yes, I do like this poem isn't it great to have a love to be inspired? Do you think poets care for what the world see? What if a poet might want to convey own thoughts perfectly understood only to the ones that are intended for? am not a poet so I am just wondering..Even if the world read only half or too little, I still think is worth sharing..in this world there is so not enough love so please let me feel your poem as a little gift and let me be one from the 'world' to smile very happy as I fed myself one little dropp of love. Thank you for share,10
We are all the drops of the boundless sea of humanity. A very nice read my friend, keep it up! Feel free to browse some of my newer poems!
nice imagery...l like the irony of a 'boundless ocean' and the 'drops' that are perceived. Nice. AC PS....couldn't find the poem you invited me to read...'Bleeding Heart on a Looking Glass'? ? ?
amazing, how could not a lady fall for this kind of love letter? ? ? ////it is very sincere.
when in love, you view things differently. Very nice romantic lines......10
This poem is very expressive. The world rarely understands the depth of feeling in the heart of the poet. Once in awhile when that connection is made, it is indeed special. An excellent write. Thanks Richard