A Pride's Validation Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Pride's Validation

Rating: 5.0


Many times, like a baby I cried, I confess,
But I overcame that cruel past...
Standing up strong without stress,
I erased a love I did not cast...

Now, as the only architect
Of my new and improved life,
I got back my self control and respect,
Ready to face any new strife...

Even when my once happy heart
Was painfully and mercilessly violated,
I never felt the world falling apart,
And back on my feet, I fully recuperated...

Awaiting for a better tomorrow,
I wide opened the doors to another sunshine...
Without any tears or silly sorrows,
I buried my past on due time...

With my heart and mind now reconciled,
I welcome the new course of my destiny,
Pasting on my face a brighter smile,
Knowing that nothing lasts for infinity...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 15 March 2010

Optimistic note with positive attitude. Life never stops, it is a perennial stream with ever fresh waters. I liked it. CP

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Ritty Patnaik 15 March 2010

dear romeo.....life takes many turns, sometimes turbulent, but to live it gracefully one needs to be optimistic as every phase is but a passing of time.your poem is excellent and has a very strong message for all.thanks for sharing......ritty

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 15 March 2010

I rated it 10 but i think it should be more than a hundred.... nice poem!

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Maryam A. 14 March 2010

i enjoyed it! great write!

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Aldo Kraas 14 March 2010

That poem is a master piece. thanks for sharing it with me.

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Ronn Michael Salinas 23 March 2010

very nice.

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Chitra - 21 March 2010

a positive poem...filled with hope to take on the challenges of life.

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Ramin Chaman 17 March 2010

Many times, like a baby I cried, I confess, But I overcame that cruel past.. ............. Hi Romeo I enjoyed it.. very well penned.. and thanks for your message.. Ramin

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Noel Horlanda 16 March 2010

get back on your feet, think positive and you'll have a brighter day. Well thought, verses were logical enough to be believable.

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Noel Horlanda 16 March 2010

get back on your feet and think positive and you'll have a bright new day once more. Nice thought, very beautifully written and logical enough to be believable.

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