A Promise Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

A Promise

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Joy has filled my heart now,
as you and I made a vow.
Never at last will I be sad,
in my heart I can not be mad.
Surely I feel happy as can be,
since you my love are with me.
Allah, I am grateful for this love,
heaven-sent blessing from above.

May our love be an everlasting commitment,
all our lives let's share a mutual sentiment.
Never to get bored by renewing the trust,
giving each other the loyalty that never rust.
And together we will both pass the test,
now let us do our part and give the best.
Dreaming is good but we have to work the ways,
or act the plan for the future while counting the days.
God will bind our love to last till the end.

Care and devotion let us keep,
at all times in love so deep.
Stay sweet and full of romance,
in this life let us enhance,
By giving our love a chance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracy Rollings 25 May 2007

Great poem, love the feeling of being together forever, feelings of great hope, and love, the flow was great and wording was excellent great write with great talent, keep up the good work, your friend Tracy ~10~

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Susana Lliteras 17 October 2007

Beautifully written piece...love it, thank you for the comment, and i'm looking forward to reading more of your poems...Thank you so much for sharing.. Take care, Susana

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Ana Monnar 31 August 2007

You are a good man that believes in love, commitment, and the happily ever after. Ana Monnar

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Janelle Morehart 30 June 2007

Oh how sweet! I love this poem. It's truly wonderful. Dreamy and Lovey. Sensitive and Caring. So sweet and coming from a man. Lol not to stereotype of course but you dont always expect those things. Anyway's I love this poem, as I do the rest of your poems! Your a wonderfu writer please keep up the great work!

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Meggie Gultiano 20 June 2007

a heart warming poem about commitment and a promise to love and to hold no matter what. A beautiful and well penned poem from a great poet

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Edna Javelosa 29 May 2007

lovely poem of sweet love and sincere commitment...

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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