Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 32,651 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

A Puzzle - Poem by Lyn Paul

It is now time to say goodbye
Without evening knowing why
The world has not ended, but my watch has stopped
You will now need to pick up the pieces... that I have dropped

See life is like a puzzle, often hard to complete
Life can be a trauma or life can be a treat
But you must remember your strength and how fast life does go
Forget all the woes and watch everything grow

Copyright Reserved May 2014
Lyn Paul

Topic(s) of this poem: death, life, time, wisdom


Comments about A Puzzle by Lyn Paul

  • Bri Edwards (1/19/2018 7:23:00 PM)


    mostly i just come to your PH site so i can look at the photos of you and your twin sister! ! !
    :) lyin'-bri
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  • Bri Edwards (1/19/2018 7:17:00 PM)


    i think you meant even............Without evening knowing why ........did the afternoon know? !

    VERY GOOD ADVICE: Forget all the woes and watch everything grow..........though often (usually) impossible to do, without ignoring one's 'responsibilities'. i like the rhyming and (overall) the poem.
    to MyPoemList. :) bri
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  • Christopher Tye (10/12/2016 8:58:00 AM)


    Really wonderful poem, sums up modern life perfectly. (Report) Reply

  • Annette Aitken (8/23/2016 10:33:00 AM)


    You have so many wonderful lines within this one...what a lovely read thank you.

    Annette
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  • Kanav Justa (12/6/2013 9:03:00 AM)


    Forget all the woes and watch everything grow , , ,
    wonderful line, , , , once we leave our sorrows aside, , then we can spend that energy in something productive, , , and grow, ,
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  • Amitava Sur (10/31/2013 6:26:00 AM)


    A lovely realization about the life as a puzzle with very many trauma & treats.... with a message still you're to move forward.... fine (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 9:47:00 AM)


    nice poem Lyn. A good observation of life. Life can be a trauma or life can be a treat (Report) Reply

  • Deepak Manchanda (8/7/2012 8:18:00 AM)


    the world has not ended but my watch has stopped...I loved that line. I loved the idea of your poem. forget all the woes and watch everything grow.. Will look out for more of your work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, May 7, 2018


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