Corey Threet

A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.0 (C) 12-09-08

I turn away the diamonds in her blood
To try to guess the texture I really wish I could
It takes a lot in order for me to get the feelin'
To see how a liquid can be the cause of all the killin'
I try to break down the root of the concrete door
But not even the rusty banner on the side tore
I try to make my way as I’m dartin' off to class
But the teacher can’t let me in if I don’t have a pass
I’m wastin' time tryna get my eyes to see right past the light
It’s hard when a bloody diamond shines brighter in the night
Or maybe I’m encompassed by the pleasure of the view
I’m still tryna make it though in minutes I only have few.
Maybe I should skip but that'll result in a detention
But knowing me I won't serve it being the cause of suspension
Then I'll be stuck at home livin in my room
Hopefully I can get away without facing doom
I think I need to sprint in order to be fine
The first bell rang and for some reason a sign
I try to yell the teachers name but no one is replyin'
So now I'm contemplatin' on if I should get to lyin'
The second bell rang only a second from the first
And I think I already have an excuse planned out and rehearsed
The third bell is on the edge and I'm making my entrance
I know I'm just gonna get ridiculed for my poor attendance
But wait I'm in and only by the skin of my teeth
But I still got off scott free so I get to gasp and yell sheesh
* Creator - Me, Maxiro Xeniyah
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Copyright 12-09-08 ©® Corey Threet

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 9, 2008
Poem Edited: Saturday, March 6, 2010

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  • Ibrahim Bidu (10/1/2010 10:03:00 AM)

    I can imagine how it feels like to be in the speaker's shoes

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  • Sean Mccoy (6/8/2010 10:17:00 PM)

    I like this one, it seems kind of limited in the printed form. I hope you have had opportunity to read it outloud. It would work as a great spoken word piece.

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  • Ivy Skies (6/7/2010 3:26:00 PM)

    You pull me, unseen, your words music on my skin.

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  • Katherine Wheatley (5/6/2010 1:26:00 PM)

    GR8! luv da randomosity of it! haha lol

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  • Anita Trivedi (4/23/2010 12:50:00 AM)

    u've very wel crafted dis 1....... its real beuty.......

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  • Cody Fryer (4/20/2010 11:51:00 AM)

    I liked the fact that this poem can relate to the majority of students nowadays. Great poem 8/10.

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (4/3/2010 11:54:00 AM)

    WOW! this is a random poem that emcompasses several poetic themes and features.Your poem confirms the complexity of life...neither coherent nor consistent... your poem randomly speaks to the truth of life.a 10

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  • Kendyll Brown (4/2/2010 11:07:00 AM)

    that was very creative, taking a simple experience an twisting it in to a work of art. Really good poem=)

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  • lucky pennies (4/1/2010 3:33:00 PM)

    you'r a great writer, you took a simple experience and turned it into a piece of art

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  • Kate Hunter (3/21/2010 11:26:00 AM)

    I love this poem! : D
    very emotional and creative

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  • Tug Delk (3/13/2010 9:54:00 PM)

    very good poem

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  • Zander Pearson (3/13/2010 5:34:00 PM)

    Creative, very creative. I like it, and it deserves to be in a book or something. I'll read more of your poems. Take a look at mine, if you can. Thx. Good Job.

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  • Christina Phan (3/12/2010 2:52:00 PM)

    very fanastic job and great imagation
    10+++

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  • Kassiah Gervaise (3/9/2010 12:55:00 AM)

    AMAZING, it paints a picture in you're mind and heart...i understand this poem,

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  • Auty Paul Jason (3/5/2010 8:31:00 AM)

    I only got one word for this poem no,1 ' Impressive'. My blood start to boil when I read this poem.

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  • Karen Touzalin (2/21/2010 8:24:00 PM)

    'I turn away the diamond in her blood', it seems like a random day, but to set your life to poetry cant be random, you need to reveal the source of your inspiration to help the reader to arrive at the destination with you. I'll keep reading the series

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  • Aldo Kraas (2/21/2010 7:44:00 AM)

    That poem is so much like you
    Trying to do everything at once.
    Yes I do the same myself
    You showed me that you feel like being that
    Race driver
    That is driving on the grand prix

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  • Giovanna Clay (2/21/2010 12:48:00 AM)

    I love the way you express yourself. I bet my son couldnt have put this better himself as it sounds like a day in the llife of his mind too.

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  • Omar Ibrahim (2/4/2010 4:14:00 AM)

    nice work.......you know it's awful to go to school!
    thanks for sharing.

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  • Jake Shelvey (12/8/2009 12:30:00 PM)

    Interesting: | can really relate to this poem as am 13 years old and go to school...=p lol yeah good poem.

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