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A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.0 (C) 12-09-08

Rating: 3.7

I turn away the diamonds in her blood
To try to guess the texture I really wish I could
It takes a lot in order for me to get the feelin'
To see how a liquid can be the cause of all the killin'
I try to break down the root of the concrete door
But not even the rusty banner on the side tore
I try to make my way as I’m dartin' off to class
But the teacher can’t let me in if I don’t have a pass
I’m wastin' time tryna get my eyes to see right past the light
It’s hard when a bloody diamond shines brighter in the night

Or maybe I’m encompassed by the pleasure of the view
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cody Fryer 20 April 2010

I liked the fact that this poem can relate to the majority of students nowadays. Great poem 8/10.

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Kendyll Brown 02 April 2010

that was very creative, taking a simple experience an twisting it in to a work of art. Really good poem=)

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lucky pennies 01 April 2010

you'r a great writer, you took a simple experience and turned it into a piece of art

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Kate Hunter 21 March 2010

I love this poem! : D very emotional and creative

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Tug Delk 13 March 2010

very good poem

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Ibrahim Bidu 01 October 2010

I can imagine how it feels like to be in the speaker's shoes

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Sean Mccoy 08 June 2010

I like this one, it seems kind of limited in the printed form. I hope you have had opportunity to read it outloud. It would work as a great spoken word piece.

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Ivy Skies 07 June 2010

You pull me, unseen, your words music on my skin.

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Katherine Wheatley 06 May 2010

GR8! luv da randomosity of it! haha lol

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Anita Trivedi 23 April 2010

u've very wel crafted dis 1....... its real beuty.......

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