Answer Me (C) 12-19-09 Poem by Zahir Kijani
Answer Me (C) 12-19-09
Even though I love you there's something I can't contain
This feeling of utter disappointment and of some undying pain
It doesn't seem to go away no matter how hard I think it's not
Because in this web of love it kinda seems like I'm caught
Now don't get me wrong I believe we still can be together
But the spark is kind of dying like the eye of stormy weather
I know there's some steps necessary before we can express affection
Because my thinking of our possible future seems to be my only protection
I don't know the reasons oral words just doesn't seem to read right
I guess the only way to let you hear how I feel is ironically to write
I wanna kiss you and I miss you but maybe us can never be
And only due to haters filling my mind with some fermented chi
Maybe I'm just trippin' or constantly movin like a dancer
I really hope we can be together so now I really need an answer.
*Virus 12 - Shy*
Copyright 12/19/08 ©® Corey Threet
PLEASE COMMENT!
Well. You are asking a question through this poem. Will the answer be another poem?
Sorry for not responding sooner. I liked the simile of the dying spark and the eye of the storm. An eternal question which every generation must find its own way to ask and answer.
Even though I love you there’s something I can’t contain This feeling of utter disappointment and of some undying pain These lines really spoke your pain and 'utter disappointment' Very well crafted, I Loved it.
Very clear expression of your tender sentiments, and boldly so, beautifully portrayed! I loved your poem, you have a great potential! And let me tell you Love is not dependence as often lover say, ' I can't love without him/her'. This is incorrect. Love is a conscious choice of independent(and not dependent- slaves) two individual to live together and enjoy the independence.Thanks.
Your analogies are great! And the emotion of dying love is really captured here
Wow! This really evokes feelings of a love slipping a way while all one can do is helplessly watch.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/14/2024 6:41:21 AM # 1.0.0
AWWWW that's so adorable... i know exactly how you feel, so i really love this poem. don't worry, a guy like you shouldn't have a problem getting a girl... maybe you should show her the poem. girls are a sucker for sweet poems...