Corey Threet

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A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.1 (C) 1/26/09 - Poem by Corey Threet

It's a cycle
Like a psycho
Like Michael
In Tyco®
it's aight though
We'll fight y'know
til the knight go
and the fright blow
So get out of sight yo
When we'll rise you might know

He's truthless
cause he ruthless
and useless
like a woodchuck toothless
In a noose pit
Until he lose it
Then he groove it
Cause he like to, move it move it

That's a tint shade lemur
Like a renegade femur
I guess I'm just a trick skate dreamer

Inspired by Lupe Fiasco's Blackout song recommend you listen to it.
*Creator - Me, Maxiro Xeniyah
Copyright 1/26/09 ©® Corey Threet
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Comments about A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.1 (C) 1/26/09 by Corey Threet

  • (3/21/2010 11:29:00 AM)

    I love the action in this poem!
    I love your poems because I can relate to them!
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  • (3/17/2010 9:09:00 AM)

    i lovee this lol. it's so rythmatic.. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/12/2010 2:53:00 PM)

    : D hehe gd one
    10++
    ur work so great n different
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  • (3/9/2010 12:57:00 AM)

    a very fun and odd poem, i liked it. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2009 5:42:00 AM)

    It is a poem with free verses. Simile is used very frequently : 'It's a cycle/Like a psycho' and 'useless/like a woodchuck toothless' '' shade lemur/Like a renegade femur''. in order to enhance the character of the person of the poem, that the author is willing to dig a little deeper, as a painting in which the face is not drawn, but only shadows appear.
    We see climax, here, like 'We'll fight y'know/til the knight go/and the fright blow'.The poem has an abstract meaning, like 'He's truthless/cause he ruthless/and useless/like a woodchuck toothless''.I like it.10+
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  • (4/28/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    lol. good rhyming. i like it. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/27/2009 8:48:00 AM)

    haha <3 it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/20/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    I LOVED IT! ! ! ! ! ! i think that its inspirational (Report)Reply

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  • (4/16/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    I realy liked this poem as well -very good! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/10/2009 6:03:00 PM)

    i rlly loved this poem as well! ! ! u have a true and natural talent! ! ! very well written and thought out! ! i would have to agree with thomas i could c this as a rap song (Report)Reply

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  • Myrtle Thomas (4/8/2009 5:46:00 PM)

    I like this its like a rapp song, or you could jump rope to it.LOL very good (Report)Reply

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  • (2/22/2009 6:39:00 PM)

    That poem is not bad at all (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/2/2009 1:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful writes from your mind...........an endless journey. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, December 11, 2009


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