I wait and I wait to here what you say
Wonderin' when you're gonna answer me
I sit and I sit all through the night and the day
Still wondering when you're gonna answer me
I'm still sittin' here after days go by
Wonderin' if what you told me was a lie
I don't understand what's going on
How long does it take to say yes or no
It seem years has gone by as the river's flowing on and on
Now I'm afraid your answer is going to be no
I can't breathe from the anticipation
I would call you but I mustn't show my desperation
Weeks have gone by and I'm feelin' heartbroken
But in the middle of it I'm startin' not to care
I'm gettin' upset because you haven't yet spoken
Until I find out that the whole time you weren't there
Now I understand I feel sad instead
If only I would've known you were dead
It's weird how fantasy can take over a lot
Even though it didn't happen you still try
You want things to change right on the spot
But you'll have a lot to change as time goes by
*Virus 12 - Shy*
Copyright 6/17/07 ©® Corey Threet
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As Alexander Pope said 'Hope springs eternal in the human breast', but how often have we confused hope with fantasy and illusion. Been there, done that, maybe about a million times - hoping, when there was nothing to hope for. Great poem, Corey.
I understand this poem well...waiting in anticipation for that word then the desperation wears off..too lead into other emotions Well written...a touch of sadness in this verse..10++
i love that poem its really good and to be honest thats whats happening to me right now.....but anyways awesome poem :)
I've definitely felt like that before. I thought this was great.
WOW...i loved this poem...i was just waiting to find out why it was that he wasn't there.. and then boom... i had to re-read it.... loved it to the fullest.. i give it a 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love the anticipation and desperation :) i love your poetry not quite intellectual, but said easy for the simple minded to read Like me, Thank you