4ever My Friend (C) 3-29-2007 Poem by Zahir Kijani

4ever My Friend (C) 3-29-2007

Rating: 4.0


4ever my friend you will always be
And you'll always be the number 1 girl to me
I know we've known each other 4 so long
And the friendship we've built has always been strong
But days go by, me wishing that we didn't have such a bond
Cause all the love I feel for you keeps building on and on
I don't want you to think I'm sweating you, or I'm like a stalker
I would tell you face to face but I'm really not much of a talker
Maybe it's because you actually count as someone I love
Or just that your a tease sent from below or fallen from above
I understand we don't share the same feelings like the romance
But how can I be judged if you've never given me any chance
Everything I probably said may sound corny or cheesy
But I really and truly love you, hopefully, you'll believe me
If not, I really don't care my feelings will never bend
But I'll know everyday of my life you'll be 4ever my friend

Thursday, March 29, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tim George 20 May 2010

Grow up, get laid, and learn a new language. Did you pay those guys to write all those comments or are they all in the same highschool as you?

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Janaiya Stephens 24 May 2010

Aw, it's super sweet! ! Whoever it is seems like a lucky girl. (Or is it metaphorical?)

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warner treuter 05 June 2010

Virtuous poem showing high-mindedness. Such breeds happiness so long as you don't expect such always from others.

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Marisa Harmony 05 June 2010

This is an amazing poem. When I was reading it, a soundless movie was playing in my head. A man and a woman destined to be, but the woman blind from it. I give you A++.

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Madi Maxwell 08 June 2010

Fantastic poem, kind of reminds me that women can be ignorant to. Keep on writin -Madi

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Chinedu Dike 05 June 2015

A heartwarming love poem, well articulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kamini Arichandran 08 November 2010

Simply Beautiful ~ A definite A+!

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Seema Chowdhury 26 October 2010

very nice and a sweet poem. when a poem is written with love and care it flows like a magic. And this poem surely does. enjoy your life and take care

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 October 2010

You have expressed your thoughts very well. Love is the only invincible thing in the world. And when you love someone and ready to do anything for him or her, your love attains culmination. Fortunate is the friend who has this kind of lover. I really like the poem. Keep on going.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 October 2010

You have expressed your thoughts very well. Love is the only invincible thing in the world. I really like the poem.

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Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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