A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.5 (C) 4-29-09 Poem by Zahir Kijani
A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.5 (C) 4-29-09
He say Sega with a passion and Saga like his nemesis
Studied the mind of Lu and set off to peep the genesis
Walked through the fire and flames so like Em he’s infinite
Gave up rap but from them I was tempted to make another attempt at it
My rhymes make the world quake only measurable with Richter
The devastation and chaos causes more doom than Victor
Maybe style is very fitted in a disorderly fashion
And I dance on them like MJ but not the one endin in Jackson
My name’s Maxiro Xeniyah and middle name Analeias
Givin the world a piece of paradise like reverse Neveah
I know that Darkness evolves off of negativity
But light evolves off of other people's possibility
I covet the love of a girl that never gave me a chance
I love her not a first sight but even the very first glance
So if you hate me it's okay just tell me you do
It won't matter to me cause I feel the same way too
I’m oxy clean but moronic and can someone tell me why
How is it that I hate the thought of livin but I’m afraid to die?
These Rhymes just pop into my head
Never once have I planned em
This is a day in the life of my mind
But the words are at random
Wow! ! Your poems are fun to read, so rich! You have the spark wich makes you shine, I found in your poems many things! can understand all your feelings, questions, and I enjoy the way you play with words.10
Intense piece. Could you guys possibly look at my poems? I came across some old poems from high school, and intend to post most of them up. I want human input, thoughts, and criticism. I will return the favor without a doubt.
This reads like plain rambling to me. what is the focus of the piece? What are you trying to suggest or say?
Words of poem should directly flow from the mind to the paper as you have done and doing which the mark of natural or pure poetry needs to be encouraged. You fit into the slot very well! Best wishes!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I wish I could write like you.10