In a crowded world where the occupants in it are dull and bland
Eagle sight over the world but still I see you like a diamond in the sand
I'd like to have our relationship completely restart
Give me Cupid's bow so that I can take another stab at your heart
But not like how I did last time I want it to be totally newerly
Tricked by her you are a diamond while she was costume jewelry
I offer myself to you with a heart purer than Poland Springs
And stick with me no matter what I do like the song Kelly Rowland sings
Betraying your trust was worst than losin you putting me in a ward for the insane
For you I'll do anything, become the most wanted and drench my soul in pain
I never wanted us to break away but I'll say that day you had our best interests at bay
I figured today I'd throw my ego away and get out of the fray of my heart bare on a tray
That day I thought I'd just see Madea and you probably just the movie premiere
But I was enticed by your beauty once again as you smiled from ear to ear
I couldn't help but to continuously walk past you in hopes of gaining your attention
But it seems I was successful as it was my hair growth that you mentioned
I know this is something you might not want to hear because you think we could never be
So here I spell out my thoughts in hopes of winning your prize like Akeelah in the Bee
Forever and beyond I can sit here and in my writing comment too
And trust I'll keep our hearts in sync and this I promise you
I'm still in love with you and baby this is a new edition of my mind
For this I say I'm just in love and will be there until the end of time
Sometimes I sit back and wonder if for once in my life love has struck me
Or will I wane and wonder if there's no letting go of being so lucky
Everything about you shows of your beauty all the way down to your name
I write you this letter expressing my feelings and in due time I hope you feel the same
PLEASE COMMENT! ! ! !
Copyright (c) 3/4/09 Corey Threet
Corey this is a most excellent letter poem, any girl would want a letter like this.It touch my heart as I read it.MOST BEAUTIFUL. A 10
oh WOW! this poem is filled with such passion and emotion. Great Job.... keep writing :)
This touches my heart, you have such feelings for her she dose not know. hope she will see you love her and are true.
I give you two thumbs up for this poem. Seriously, this poem is so beautifully written and expressed. It made so much sense. I almost cried towards the end because it is so beautiful. Great chioce of words! ! !
Thats a good poem....you dont find that many men willing to be that deep with their feelings...good job
i love this poem it mostly say something that are happen in my life right now. it a sweet poem and i love it thanks for writing it.
this poem is really sweet great job displaying caring emotions^^
beautifully penned..you let you heart and feelings out in this truly wonderful piece..
So far that is one of your best poems You see that when you don't use rhime you poem become more effective
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love happy endings, and I see you do too. If I were/are this person to whom you were/are speaking I surely would give it another go...Seems like your ready to settle into a love routine, who knows...Lightning might strike twice and really put on an electrifying (and edifying) show! Good luck in this quest. You're the best part of it so far.