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A Rare Truth

Rating: 5.0

Bloom could the cherries no more,
The haste that burdened,
Made visionary the sight,
Restrictions frequent but pure,
Had not known,
The cold bare winter tree,
That stood all day long,
To which history had shared the secret.

Once it happened so,

A bird wingless sought shelter too,
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Aijaz Asif 20 November 2008

its a very powerful write with strong metaphor, wonderful imaginery..with words bit hard to swallow :) ...keep up with the good writting and thanks for sharing...10 rgds asif

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Mahfooz Ali 30 September 2007

Very good poem Uzma.........do keep posting.......... Thanx 4 sharing...... words mein wazan zyada hai........jo ki ek achche poet ki nishani hai......very gud........keep it up......

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Abdulrauf Muhammad 27 April 2019

your poem is really meaningful and creative, and I like it. can you please read and rate my poem " I seek a friend" . thank you

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

a lovely poem. nice imagery. the sky shone making the air sweet. and the lips smiled with the curves of joy.

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Afzal Shauq 23 May 2010

a lovely written poem..the idea is quite rich.. meaningful and heart touching poem..specially these two lines are very very meaningful And the lips smiled with the curves of joy, All was seen a rare truth of dependent history.

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Saadat Tahir 12 July 2009

hi there...very nice lines Bloom could the cherries no more, The haste that burdened, Made visionary the sight, Restrictions frequent but pure, Had not known, i too write in this double inverted style....at times i am castigated for it....but what to do...you write as u like to... i liked your lines a lot cheers

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Muhammad Ali 12 May 2009

Nice poem.... when you were wet in thoughts! ! ! and you wanna share those very potenially! ! great urge to say what u thinking..........10 Ali

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