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A Journey To Eternity

Rating: 5.0

Time is to take a jerky turn,
I blinkingly moved away,
The end is flawless,
Nostalgias awakened;
Poppies form a folly,
Right from the trooper,
An air of fragrance,
Moves all day along,
Six feet below is to lie thee,
Swiftness moves terribly in autumn,

Leafless trees,
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Usman Hanif 21 November 2011

six feet below is to lie thee... clap clap the poem sounds somewhat a transition from coldness to hope. good work

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The upward call of eternity! An inspired poem! Well done; D

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Vijay Sai R 21 June 2010

A whiff of eternal divinity!

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Afzal Shauq 20 June 2010

Journey to the heaven continues, Bodies surrender, Souls activate, Moving towards eternity. i agreed with your say what you expressed in this poem. phlosophical way of depth in this poem makes the idea more impressive and soul knowcking..because you tried to disclose the really..soul, body and the relationship between intangible and tangible things make the life running ahead.. but all go to end when there is no linkages between..yes uzma, life is every but nothing.. loved this poem a lot and read it few time and enjoyed the idea...wish you never stop writing...and always write such type of good poems..best of luck

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Stunning, wonderfully penned. Love it with 10.

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Sudipta Bhattacharyya 14 January 2016

Bodies surrender, soul active , wonderful truth steeped with high spirituality. Too nice a poem shared by you! ! Thanks, Best regards. Sudipta Bhattacharyya.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 November 2013

Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 November 2013

Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 November 2013

Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.

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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

A beautiful thoughtful poem. A journey continues on to heaven,

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