poet Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

A Ray Of Sun

While drawing a circle,
A ray of sun that slips on your sad face
Is not only a ray, it is the light.
Moreover, my feelings
slipping in your soul
Until your heart
Begins to vibrate
Mean all,
Because they come from God.

Copyright © Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: sunshine

Poem Submitted: Friday, May 22, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, February 13, 2015

Form: Blues Poem


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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (1/25/2010 8:20:00 AM)

    Very meaningful...a gentle poetic way of expressing your love.....lovely10

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  • Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty (1/16/2010 10:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful. poet portraits the feeling. unique piece of painting by words.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (1/6/2010 3:15:00 PM)

    From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: a ray of sun


    This is a very beautiful image, economy of words, well penned

    Randy

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  • Eric Roxas (1/3/2010 7:22:00 AM)

    This short poem said everything it needed to convey. Perfect in style and in choice of words. Beautifully written. Very thoughtful writing!
    Eric

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  • Oyekake Satty O S JoshuaOyekake Satty O S Joshua (12/26/2009 8:12:00 AM)

    Marieta, you just warmed my heart with this piece! !
    It's beautiful!

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (11/25/2009 8:24:00 PM)

    The ray of light and the feelings- both slipping into...the former into face the latter into soul...an allegorical beauty...well done Mari...10

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  • Kranthi Pothineni (11/12/2009 3:53:00 AM)

    Simple and short, but meaningful. Interesting write.

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  • Edward Parsley (11/5/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    It is heartfelt and an important comment on human drive and aspiration. Well done

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  • Dierks Emerick (11/4/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    poem of love, which vibrates, in the silence of the moment
    10

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (11/3/2009 3:15:00 PM)

    From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: forever yours


    hello Marietta.
    I promise i will get deeper in your work.
    I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts.

    kind regards

    stuiterdick

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  • Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:30:00 PM)

    Concise but full of meaning,
    10

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  • Moonbee CanadyMoonbee Canady (10/26/2009 4:43:00 PM)

    I Like Your Style of Poetry... (I'm Still New, To The Hunter... But I Think You May Be One Of My Favorite Writers, Here... So, Far, I Like Everything I Read of yours... Good Write, A Nice Flow To The Words, Beautiful Phrases... Very Emotive...Nicely Done...
    From Sister Poet, MoonBee

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  • Roxane Sarandon (10/25/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    Truly poetical beauty in few words..10+++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2009 7:45:00 PM)

    A ray of sun that slips on your sad face,
    By drawing a circle,
    Is not only a ray, it is light,
    But my feelings,
    That slip in your soul
    Until your heart
    Begins to vibrate,
    Means all.....sun is power and knowledge... its little exposure on you mens spread of energy and light in ur thoughts and in body comepetly enligtheing you for new areas.... so wide concept in writing....welll done....10

    read mine yes yes yes...yes to to...real neighbour

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/20/2009 2:33:00 PM)

    From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: hi


    ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings.
    keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/18/2009 10:05:00 AM)

    From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Thanks Mari


    I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan

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  • Jessica Hoffman (10/9/2009 11:53:00 AM)

    I think your poems are the poetic image and full of limpid words................

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  • Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    I sincerely hope this note finds you in the very best of health and spirits. I found this particular poem very moving and pleasing.10

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  • Abigail Roscoe (9/30/2009 1:19:00 PM)

    beautiful poem, rays of sun is a source of energy....................

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (9/30/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    From: Nishit Kalavadia (India ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 9/27/2009 12: 02: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: DEAR................................................................................................................................


    TREMENDOUS EFFORTS TO WRITE POEMS YOUR POEMS ARE THE BEST ONE

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