A Ray Of Sun Poem by Marieta Maglas
A Ray Of Sun
While drawing a circle,
A ray of sun that slips on your sad face
Is not only a ray, it is the light.
Moreover, my feelings
slipping into your soul
Until your heart
Begins to vibrate
Mean all,
Because they come from God.
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Variant
While sketching a circle,
a beam of sunlight that touches
your sorrowful face
is more than just a ray; it embodies light.
In addition, my emotions
weave their way into your spirit,
awakening your heart
to resonate with meaning,
for they are gifts from the divine.
The ray of light and the feelings- both slipping into...the former into face the latter into soul...an allegorical beauty...well done Mari...10
It is heartfelt and an important comment on human drive and aspiration. Well done
poem of love, which vibrates, in the silence of the moment 10
Very meaningful...a gentle poetic way of expressing your love.....lovely10
Beautiful. poet portraits the feeling. unique piece of painting by words.
From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: a ray of sun This is a very beautiful image, economy of words, well penned Randy
This short poem said everything it needed to convey. Perfect in style and in choice of words. Beautifully written. Very thoughtful writing! Eric
Marieta, you just warmed my heart with this piece! ! It's beautiful!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 10:34:19 PM # 1.0.0
Interesting stracture and meaning, beautiful poem!