At the sound of the beat of wings,
The sky with power was filled.
Geese on their long journey southwards,
In ‘V’ formation drilled.
A sight, as their amazing cries,
Floated across the blue.
Each bird knowing its position,
As the great flock onwards flew.
All such fascinating creatures,
Special, every one.
What a regal vision they offer,
Flying towards the sun.
© Ernestine Northover
Always a wonderful sight. You make me want to look up at the sky in anticipation. Another evocative write.
Hi Ernestine. Another of my favourite subjects nature and you have managed yet again to portray it so well. thanks for the read Dave T 10/10
Your respect for natures beauty shines through Ernestine, so many times I have come to notice this WONDERFUL Love duncan XX
Your words transport the reader into the sky amid the soft beating of their wings. Lovely images that linger in the reader's mind beyond the final line.j xx
A spectacular image penned with majestic style and vision. The reader is lifted on the wings of these amazing birds through the magic of your words. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is indeed a regal sight, the V formation of the geese as they journey, Your poem is powerful like the beating of their wings, lovely Ernestine, Lynda xx