A Rose For My Heart Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
A Rose For My Heart
A rose for my heart to rise with wings
To the heavens deep, where pleasure rings
With bliss as clouds—high silver beings.
The rose's romantic fragrance sings,
Dear as the tune the nightingale brings.
To my heart's delight, its singing swings.
How my heart to nirvana, it flings.
To the rose, with rapture my heart clings.
In my heart, liveliness outright springs,
Like the mountain, whose cheerful height slings
To the sky, where the star of day tings.
To my heart, how fay-like the feelings.
I dont remember when I last read something so silky, beautiful and true........ that's a masterpiece there.. I am kind of jealous though!
Hello friend, Its an honor being invited to read your poem. How nice to hear and read those wonderfully interwoven poem of its quality making me feel near to my beloved nature. a rate of 10++++. Please read my poem and do comments and rating too to help me become a great poem like you and for that, thanks much
A lovely read and a nice present to offer to one's heart...
Light and simple, has a good flow and nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading this.10+++ best regards, jdh
This is a thought provoking poem directing my thoughts inward
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 7:20:46 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Commendable work, Obinna. The piece has moves mellifluously throughout. Imagework & metaphoric play ties together nicely...One suggestion, that you take a look at all your one stanza works...and consider employing couplet stanzaic structure to those that may enable the flow of the work to flow even better.Also, believe it or not...the aesthetics of a poem's structure comes into the Reader's mind & has a direct affect on how they read the poem versus how you wanted them to, whether they realise it or not.....Otherwise...Job Well Done. FjR