A Secret That Seeks For Clouds Poem by Ivy Christou

A Secret That Seeks For Clouds

Rating: 5.0


I wish I could find the right words
and my lost courage..
I wish I could tell you how much you mean to me
and that days seem lifeless with out you
because when you are around I have a genuine smile
and I feel optimistic as if the whole world belongs to me.

I don't know what restrains me
on sharing my love with you,
especially when I seem to gain wings in your presence
and I feel proud for myself for a change
just because you like me as I am.

And as the time passes by
breaths become even harder to take
as if a weight is placed upon my heart.
And nights are long without your goodnight
and rainbows are grey when you are not sitting next to me.

Extend your hand to me,
make these wings mine
and this smile permanent.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seán O' Muiriosa 24 November 2005

Ivy, another great poem! I love the way you go into the depths of a relationship between two people and describe the feelings vividly. It's an amazing gift you have. Best wishes, Seán

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Uriah Hamilton 25 November 2005

This a very beautiful love poem, thanks for sharing this one. I love the name Blue Sunflower for some reason!

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Georgios Venetopoulos 30 January 2013

It is a confession in free verse. Sensitive write, with humbleness on behalf of the authoress. Thank you for it.

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Manonton Dalan 27 September 2008

i alaways be by your side as we watch ebbs and flow of tide breathe free as wind blow cause i never leave you thanks md.

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Duncan Wyllie 08 June 2006

Beautyiful, again you show us such a lovely way about you, Love Duncan x

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Peter Rodenby 08 February 2006

i liked this one too the last verse in particular is very a good ending

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Ronberge . 04 December 2005

I enjoyed this one too. Well done 'Blue Sunflower' Amicalement votre, Ronberge.

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