A Shadow Poem by adheez van der beanthz

A Shadow

Rating: 2.5


I am a shadow
that born by the ray
though few that heed

I live in the darkness
even when the ray is lying
I still be there, still faithful

watching for your steps
keeping each your hopes
until you find
the next ray that come

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 14 May 2013

wild touches the heart, reflecting every inch that hold every breath......your such a balancing lines of poet i ever read....so smooth to recall the hook of survival....God bless a 10/10

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Patricia Grantham 11 June 2013

Your shadow is always a constant presence. Whither you go it goes. You can't run nor hide from it. A very good write.

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

your shadow is a constant companion it is always hanging around. a good write.

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Sallam Yassin 26 July 2013

nice to keep the hope til the next ray/ nice one

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Arabella Picken 07 August 2013

Quite like this. Good sum-up of a shadow.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 March 2014

I am a shadow that born by the ray though few that heed..true painting thank

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The Fallen Leaves Of Mira 03 January 2014

very touching poem. It reminds me of myself.. Happy new year my friend :)

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Gary H 29 December 2013

Very nice, like this one quite a lot.

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Valsa George 22 December 2013

A shadow is inseparable! Wherever you go, it will follow you! A shadow can stay only with the light! A good write with deeper layers of meaning!

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Shereen Ramadan 15 August 2013

wonderful it is simple but it is still has deeper meanings

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