A Shattered Soul Poem by Jeremy Horsford

A Shattered Soul

Rating: 4.8


I made the ultimate sacrifice.

I left with no where to go.

All I have left are diluted dreams and material acquisitions.

My belongings represent a closed chapter of my life.

Shards of my love lay scattered around our world.

Half truths shattered my belief.

Our crops failed to flourish on barren land.

I was left to bleed new life into our land.

I must dig deep to carry on.

Monday, May 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: break up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Powerfully strong and delicately stated emotions. Shards of my love lay scattered around our world. Beautifully sad, steeped in sorrow's depths. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Jeremy Horsford 08 December 2015

Thank you for sparring a few moments.

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Lynn More 22 August 2015

I really love this poem it draws you in very greatly written

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Jeremy Horsford 08 December 2015

I glad you liked it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2018

I was left to bleed new life into our land. I must dig deep to carry on. Bleeding heart, pain, sufferings, thoughts, loneliness....... all expressed so well in this fine poem.. tony

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Emily Angelova 17 March 2017

I love this one Jeremy :)

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Charmaine J Forde 03 August 2016

I love this poem Jeremy

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The Random Poet 03 July 2016

This brings to mind of the Native Americans being forced off their lands to reservations - A sad painful moment in history that continues to this day...... Excellent work!

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Jeremy Horsford 03 August 2016

Your point of reference is interesting. A break up is a break up after all.

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Sossi Khachadourian 24 May 2016

Good job dear Jeremy!

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Jeremy Horsford

Jeremy Horsford

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