A Silent Pains Poem by hazem al jaber

Nicely writen, nice to read. well done

WoW beautiful exepresion enhancing with honestly feeling and that is the main needing in the safe world with my best wishing Laila Lili

Very matured stroke by pen beautifully constructed keep going

hazeem i can sense your silent pains it touched me a great deal thanks for sharing this lovely piece love anju

Intensive silent pain, well composed poem.

The poem written with crimson blood, so pain and so hurt....literally and heartfelt...That's mean you have power in your hand that make your poem so real for readers...anyway i wish all the best for her for one day she will find the glory day and win over sadness..peace! Salam_Unwritten Soul

a typical poem to describe how our pains are incarcerated within our hearts..it does not take us much time to express our emotions provided we dropp our shyness or ego or anything that stops us.

Silent pains lead to rage and depression, it's better to express them in any way or another. Sport is one outlet, poetry is another. Both serve to release the pain and calm the beating heart... I invite you to read 'A poetess wrath', you'll see how a woman releases her pain and her rage. Good write.

there are pains that are better kept sient, without knowing what it is, i feel the pain too.this is the best way it can be expressed, the massage is great!

There's a great message behind this poem.. i enjoyed reading it very much. great work!