A Silent Sight Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
A Silent Sight
a fleet of birds
in the sky
forming an arrow
cutting across the wind
to reach their destination....
the shape remains the same
the birds keep changing their positions
to avoid exhaustion
what was the instruction?
who was their instructor?
no gathered audience
there was not a sound in this sight
a fleet of fighter planes
in the sky
forming an arrow
cutting across the wind
it was a demonstration
the shape keeps changing
the planes keep changing positions
it is a planned execution
there was an instruction
there was a team leader
a gathered audience to applause
there was a lot of sound in this sight
one is quite natural....
the other is done to show potential.
one is natural.... other showing potential....... i liked it.........the imagery u created.....and your thinking process........and yeah the writing style.......
This indeed is a very good write.. I like the argumentative manner in which you express yourself.. You always make the reader think.. This is great..10++ regards Shan
A very good thought, invokes further thinking. Nice comparision. Vanita.
Hi Samanyan, The only spiritual presence is that of the birds. If we as humans cannot talk over problems then we are lost, Greetings, Paul
It’s a very good observation of Nature’s mosaic and well compared with ‘Man-Made’ same. Enjoyed Sir. Ten+ niv. New post Expiry ~ Date or any poem. Please read and comment and…. niv.
One is divinely orchestrated and the other flocks of birds could be used to destroy divine's beauty. Great comparison.
Without any formal training, a fleet of bird take an organized flight, reorient themselves to change position.Fighter planes do the same thing under instruction. Apparently their patterns of cruises are very similar, but a lot differs behind.Excellent idea.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A very good write. I enjoyed reading and give you a 10. Your friend Lynn