A Spiral Moments Of Stolen Ecstasy Poem by Julian Salvacion
A Spiral Moments Of Stolen Ecstasy
Let me bring you thoughts from the clouds
Fly with me,
Visit the realm of reveries
Let ourselves be lost
An ecstasy of dreams
Entwine me in your labyrinth
Fuel me with your visions of the heavens
Join me now as we capture the moment
Slowly now my beloved
As you and I was meant to be one
Aboard the ship of fantasies
Cast away by desires and retributions
Tighter this time as we cease the escapade
Feel my love with every sway
Tighter! Tighter! Tighter!
As we sink in an altitude of confusion
Let our spirit be the guide
As we profess our love this night
As two will become one
In a moment you and I would only understand
In a moment that you and I have stolen
Hush now! For what was due has been done
Enter a deep slumber this time
I will guard you til’ you come to your senses
Goodnight my love! Goodnight!
such a great start to write...keep on penning you are doing a great job... a10.
all your poems have magic around them.. like tin sparkles getting bigger and bigger and lift you off your feet. Good job..
your poem is great and i think your a great poet..best of luck
I am in awe! hypnotized by the words it draws me through the clouds spiralling into the labyrinth of fantasy that even the prying eyes could not follow! :) love it!
Lovers journey through the coil of pleasure! Again through the elements! But why........ we sink in an altitude of confusion! and Hush now! For what was due has been done, is enigmatic! But at last......... will guard you...gives some assurance! How the cultural differences between countries colors the variety of interpretations A sweet, sensual and romatic poem! Keep on.......Julian.
Oh! Dear Hold tight we would travel on wings of ectasy, Hold tight We would trespass on the realm of fantasy. Good images and ideas.
nice flow of words and thoughts, easy to follow... this one stirs the senses...
I really enjoy this You seem to have the right type of thinking
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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a wonderful poem...nice to read...lovely...A10 Ency Bearis