A Splash Of Joyful Memories Poem by Sameer Ahmed

A Splash Of Joyful Memories

Rating: 4.7


Sun beams
Reflect through
Cotton wool like remnants
Of departing clouds
In linear patterns.

Tiny pearls
Juggle the light rays
And diverge
An arc
In seven hues.

Scent of silt
And sodden dust
Rides the gust
Of mushroomy cool breeze
And disperse the serenity.

Jiving grasshoppers
Camouflaged in green
Mingle furtively
On dance floor
Of moistened grass.

Naked trees
Gravitate by wetness
Ensue the wistfulness
Of olden days
When standing beneath them
After a rainfall
We would jolt their trunk
And enjoy the splash.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Sathasivam 21 June 2009

Enjoy your imagery here. Nice write. Thanks for sharing with me

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Subbaraman N V 19 June 2009

Nice write! I love nature and nature poets! Naturally I love you! Congrats!

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Jack Tex 19 June 2009

Nature boy, are ya? This one is movin in some ways that only nature poeple would understand. On the whole, nice goin on the out-door imagery.

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Debra Joseph 18 June 2009

A lovely poem Sameer! Really very well expressed.

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 June 2009

ohhh friend! ! this is a joyful read indeed...great one for the sore battered and shattered heart... thanks for this one, enjoyed it very much 10++ regards shan

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Marla Smith 11 July 2009

It is very true in life, but also makes you look at many other points and views in it.

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Sicelo Sithole 03 July 2009

beautiful images here Sameer, well composed verse...interesting to read. thank you.

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Ted M 27 June 2009

Brings back lovely memories of the younger years. The early morning rains and the little creatures around. Great Write.

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Ravi A 23 June 2009

Here, the rain has brought you some evergreen memories. Good. In my case also, rain is also a strong a element and so can easily absorb your poem. Good verses.

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Aamnah Akhtar 22 June 2009

the poetry... it's picturesque... it talks to you... it's humble... and yet you have so much expertise with the language... i'm so glad i got to read this...

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