Sameer Ahmed

Rookie (08/17/1986 / Pakistan)

A Splash Of Joyful Memories - Poem by Sameer Ahmed

Sun beams
Reflect through
Cotton wool like remnants
Of departing clouds
In linear patterns.

Tiny pearls
Juggle the light rays
And diverge
An arc
In seven hues.

Scent of silt
And sodden dust
Rides the gust
Of mushroomy cool breeze
And disperse the serenity.

Jiving grasshoppers
Camouflaged in green
Mingle furtively
On dance floor
Of moistened grass.

Naked trees
Gravitate by wetness
Ensue the wistfulness
Of olden days
When standing beneath them
After a rainfall
We would jolt their trunk
And enjoy the splash.


Comments about A Splash Of Joyful Memories by Sameer Ahmed

  • (7/11/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    It is very true in life, but also makes you look at many other points and views in it. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/3/2009 6:33:00 AM)

    beautiful images here Sameer, well composed verse...interesting to read. thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/27/2009 10:20:00 AM)

    Brings back lovely memories of the younger years. The early morning rains and the little creatures around. Great Write. (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi A (6/23/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    Here, the rain has brought you some evergreen memories. Good. In my case also, rain is also a strong a element and so can easily absorb your poem. Good verses. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/22/2009 9:47:00 AM)

    the poetry... it's picturesque... it talks to you... it's humble... and yet you have so much expertise with the language... i'm so glad i got to read this... (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi Sathasivam (6/21/2009 6:03:00 AM)

    Enjoy your imagery here. Nice write.
    Thanks for sharing with me
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  • (6/19/2009 4:09:00 AM)

    Nice write! I love nature and nature poets! Naturally I love you! Congrats! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/19/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    Nature boy, are ya? This one is movin in some ways that only nature poeple would understand. On the whole, nice goin on the out-door imagery. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/18/2009 2:57:00 AM)

    A lovely poem Sameer! Really very well expressed. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/17/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    ohhh friend! ! this is a joyful read indeed...great one for the sore battered and shattered heart... thanks for this one, enjoyed it very much 10++

    regards
    shan
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  • (6/15/2009 4:25:00 AM)

    yap...really joyful....the splash has fourteen hues..much more than that of the rainbow (Report)Reply

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  • (6/14/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    nice poem if u like going out side but i stay in my home nice and some what happy (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2009 2:28:00 PM)

    Great! I am new in poem but i am impressed your beautiful poem..Really perfect..i hope i will be a perfect poet as you..please read my poems..i wonder your comments... (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    Fresh is your poem
    Refreshing the drizzle
    Youthful spirit
    Childhood memories
    Never to be forgotten
    Thanks, Sameer,
    For giving us a glimpse
    Into our forgotten
    Childhood days!
    Angel
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  • (6/13/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    Metaphorical genius. It's very thoughtful and structured brilliantly. Beautiful (Report)Reply

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  • (6/12/2009 10:22:00 PM)

    lovely write! ....keep it up! .. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/12/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    Another nice poem. Keep going. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/12/2009 5:51:00 PM)

    o whatta nice piece dear little one..this is a great poem ha..and the proof is..it is included in top 500..naizz (Report)Reply

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  • (6/12/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    oh you really amazed me you get 10 out of 10 for this poem i wish all the best your sincerly tega.a (Report)Reply

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  • (6/12/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    beauitful imagery and sentiment. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 6, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 22, 2009


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