# A Stubborn Old Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Stubborn Old

Rating: 4.3


a stubborn old
would not let
in the new...
break it open
without fear
may be it is
just a shell
to be broken
for you to
taste the new
fruit ripe
within it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 21 July 2009

....and the yielding young... Cheers. Subroto

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Carol Gall 21 July 2009

stubborn is maybe fear of new or change good write

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Pandian Angelina 21 July 2009

'break it open without fear' You show the path You give courage When you say Break it open You give hope And longing When you say It might be a fruit Inside waitng To be enjoyed You give a dream Could be Pearl too To be treasured for life! So, why fear with you near? The old may be stubborn The new yet holds some Hope of bliss! Angel

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Ency Bearis 21 July 2009

meaningful verses...well penned..

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Sandra Martyres 22 July 2009

The old must give way to the new...good write

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Mamta Agarwal 08 August 2009

a closed mind and a closed fist- you can't get any where with them. lovely messagein a few crisp lines. 10 Mamta

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Catrina Heart 24 July 2009

What a nice short poem..truly most oldies dont open their doors to newly modernise world and mind...Thanks!

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Smiley Hooker 24 July 2009

There is nothing wrong with changes and welcoming or embracing them is a different thing. As we grow old, we must bear that wide understanding on different matters...let's be open-minded. A change maybe good or bad, but as grown ups, we supposed to have that edge on wise decision-making. Very nice, Sam! :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 July 2009

This is really a master stroke! I faced such situation in late 80s at Chennai.........but as you said I could break into.....................

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Ravi A 23 July 2009

A good idea. We are all doing it in our own way. There is only one Absolute truth. The rest is interpretations. Out of these interpretations all sciences, economics, religions, the various streams of life are born. Out of these interpretatrions, we should be able to get at the the Absolute truth. This is most important. We are trying to reach at the Absolute truth chiefly through this objective world and this is our difficulty.

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