A Summers View Poem by Dee Corpolongo

A Summers View

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As I walked along the forest path
that led out to the sea
The thoughts that lingered on through my mind
were as beautiful as they could be

The oceans cool breeze and crashing waves
gave me a feeling I can not forget
The gathering of squawking seagulls
the changing palette of another sunset

As I stopped to watch the colors
that seemed to set the sky aflame
Some chills had ran right through me
I wondered if anyone ever felt the same

I had to smile just in knowing
what a beautiful world we share
just look and you'll discover
what a wonder there is out there.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just expressing my feelings for today!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 12 August 2013

Yes pure beauty in nature Dee. Particularly our ocean. I feel and see this beauty every day too and love capturing these sights. Love your forest path taking you out to see

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Valerie Dohren 13 August 2013

Beautiful Dee, some lovely imagery and very well put together. Well done, a great poem.

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Smoky Hoss 05 May 2014

Wow, what wonderful words from the soul on natures grandeur. Isn't she (nature) truly something amazing? I love the poem Dee.

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Ramesh Rai 05 September 2013

I had to smile just in knowing what a beautiful world we share just look and you'll discover what a wonder there is out there.

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Heather Wilkins 29 August 2013

you paint a beautiful picture with words Dee, the images are great.

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Unwritten Soul 23 August 2013

Display your feeling here with beautiful thing for us to see..I love the expression you did here...what a summer view! _Soul

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Valsa George 23 August 2013

Watching a beautiful sunset is ever a delight! The sky turning crimson and the golden light falling, the crashing breakers, the seagulls squeaking.... all these make us lose in a world of beauty! ! Lovely write! !

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