A Sweet Lily Comments

poem of love..beautiful and nicely done..grace

was staring with you and a beautiful lily you let us see..beautiful one

Lots of heart -felt verse here, , Emotion comes through Love duncan X

I like your poems, it's a pleasure to read them! I am sure you would do anything to sail over the wild sea and be near that 'sweet lily'.

this is a lovely poem, that i would like to read over and over again. its nice to read a poem that you can feel not only read through the wordings.

the breath of flower when intense with fragrance A sweet lily as i stare on beyond the other side of the sea The start with a sweet dusk of words like nothing but the beauty untold curved on the sands of time the poet swim to new heights

a very beautiful heartfelt, deserve to have much more i can rate.

your poems remind me of wordsworth and like him you too are Nature pagan, little things of beauty get a place in your lines and come alive...

A classical poetry filled with substance and imagination! A 10.

This is such a Wonderful piece of poetry Subhendu...I love the imagery and the feeling it invokes it myself as the reader! I only wish I could understand all of the symbolism you weave throughout this piece...because to understand everything sometimes is a Gift... I truly enjoy your work and am so glad to have read it today.Now because of this piece I stand on the other side of this sea you write of and wish to gazing out at this Amazing Gift God gave us...called the Sea. Top marks from me....and Thanx for sharing. Take care of U my friend.......TEN! ! ! Shelley

This is a fantastic write, thank you so much for sharing.

It sounds like a dream... you use beautiful imagery.