A Tremor In My Heart Poem by Orlando Belo

A Tremor In My Heart

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I was talking with some friends
when you appeared out of the blue.
My voice failed in mid-sentence,
at the first sight of you.

When you turned and looked at me,
a tremor in my heart took place.
My heart raced and began thumping.
I saw my dreams on your face.

Your next glance brought with it a smile,
which immediately captured me.
My friends saw the effect you were having,
but you were all I could see.

I apologised for stopping in mid-sentence,
but I had become completely mesmerised.
My friends laughed, jeered, and taunted me,
but they could not see the love in your eyes.

Friday, December 24, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: friends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 December 2021

Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings, lovely and very passionate write. Thanks for sharing and merry Christmas.

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Kim Barney 24 December 2021

Love this! Totally believable and captivating!

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David Wood 24 December 2021

It's always the same, love does make you tongue tied.

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