A Trickle Of Thoughts - 59 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 59

Rating: 4.9

Roads that are paved
with tears and pains
are like the deepest roots of a tree.
They could never be broken,
even by the deadliest storm.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sunday, April 21, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: rights,rose,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koffi B Sossou 21 April 2024

Rose, I partially agree with you. I would say they are hard to break. But do agree with the metaphor behind. Great leaders mostly come from great storms.

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Terence George Craddock 27 April 2024

p1 roads marked with tears and pain are scorched in drought flooded in torrential rain, all roads mapped out are cut into earth sealed engineered with effort, built with purpose leading to somewhere nowhere destinations, life destination

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I wrote the poem 'Roads Marked With Tears And Pain', inspired by the poem 'A Trickle Of Thoughts - 59', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 April 2024

Brilliant verse Bravo Rose-Marie TFS! ! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 April 2024

Absolutely true! This powerful Trickle of Thought 59 wonderfully worded. and so finest captured. My grand applause for the great Poetess! 5 Stars fullest

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Rebecca Navarre 16 May 2024

Magnificently expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 16 May 2024

Thank God for each painful road we've walked and survived, to see the beautiful lavender flowers on the next pathway! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 16 May 2024

So Beautifully and heart movingly expressed! ..

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Bharati Nayak 29 April 2024

There must be a strong will when we invest our tears and pains and certainly we would never like to go them in vain even in the face of deadliest opposition! A beautiful thought, thanks for sharing.

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Terence George Craddock 27 April 2024

p2 choices are made at every turn fork in the road, hopes dreams trials encountered on the road may effort faith lead us to peaceful rest at arrival destinations

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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