M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

A Voice From Heart - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I heard a voice that came from the heart
That He/It will not be with me in my mourning

मेरे सुने दिल की धड़कन से एक आवाज़ ये आई है
की मेरे जनाज़े में वो मेरे साथ न आएगी

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death

Form: ABC

Comments about A Voice From Heart by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/28/2016 8:01:00 AM)

    Classic one, in two lines you said everything, precise and profound. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (1/9/2016 5:43:00 PM)

    Two lines with a novel of meaning.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (1/8/2016 2:55:00 PM)

    Short, simple, beautiful, and wonderfully crafted.. Thanks for sharing Asim..10. (Report) Reply

  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/8/2016 2:07:00 PM)

    Marne ke baad bhi uska wajood tumhare rooh ka hissa hai, wo aai n aaai kya farq paRta hai.. Lajawab. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/8/2016 1:53:00 PM)

    Life and death are two realities with beats of heart as we know. Very amazing poem shared here again.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 8, 2016

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