A Walk In The Woods Poem by prasanna kumari

A Walk In The Woods

Rating: 5.0


To the hilltop

led by the sound of sunlight drawing pictures
urged by time
erasing and re-shaping again and again

at every curve
old things emerge and re-emerge
perhaps, like the hatred
which I left some time back

nature brimming with a furtive smile
and
winking with singing colors

Me, an intruder
inhaling wrinkled happiness

the hills and valleys seek
the harmony of mist
to hide solidified sobs and sighs
the topless trees telling stories to the rain
of moments of seduction and gloom present
the darkened pond escapes to the corner
heavy with a destitute’s biography
veiled sorrow stumbling on
the remnants of concocted complexities
babbling brooks trying to evade
shamelessly woven dreams of the meadows
the cascade rhyming love-laden hours
with glory, grandeur and grace

I stand here, naked
with a haunting melody inside….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 12 September 2008

Absolutely amazing. Thanks and please keep writing on.

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Kee Thampi 25 September 2008

My pen is still with a love of madness, poet made it with a streakness, greatest work the hills and valleys seek the harmony of mist to hide solidified sobs and sighs the topless trees telling stories to the rain of moments of seduction and gloom present the darkened pond escapes to the corner heavy with a destitute’s biography veiled sorrow stumbling on the remnants of concocted complexities babbling brooks trying to evade shamelessly woven dreams of the meadows the cascade rhyming love-laden hours with glory, grandeur and grace

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Sherif Monem 20 July 2010

Very beautifil poem.

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Pankajam K 23 March 2012

your affinity for nature reflects in all the poems.

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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2014

A nice, well articulated piece. Good job. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem #409 MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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One of the best poems dedicated to Nature I have ever read.............I am elevated

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Desert Life 30 November 2012

Nature..beautifully crafted, painted with feelings!

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Walterrean Salley 03 November 2012

A delicate, lovely ode to nature for all she has to offer by way of beauty and inspiration.

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Valsa George 06 September 2012

Truely beautiful with the last couplet stealing the show! !

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