A Walk With Maid Merriam.....Merry With The Merry Band Poem by saadat tahir
A Walk With Maid Merriam.....Merry With The Merry Band
Shaded winding ways an streams
Humming brook brims an beams
Filtered light in misty shafts
Nudging floating leafy rafts
Rolling hills of beauteous view,
Grazing lands and yes mildew.
The eaten log fallen for years,
The beaten path of passing bears.
Bedded leaves and peeping flowers.
Forget-me-nots like blinking stars.
Worn and trodden winding paths
Stirring views of grassy swaths
Turned aside through lazy bends
Tranquil hush of an angler ends
Rustle of leaves and distant calls
a little saunter by the water falls
She so fresh; dimpled an cute,
full of life in her well worn suit.
chitter and chatter we paced along
Then she froze, we heard the gong
A pause! …then a zip an thud.
An arrow lands with a towed bud
Inched we forward to the moat,
hidden in the reeds, there a boat.
With a beam she said I have to go
As she slowly began to row
Waved we sad an slow good byes
Floated as she, away on my sighs
Dark in the shadows a hooded form
Click! I logged off, to stall the storm.
(Islamabad)
(April 27,2009)
I agree with Anastasia that it is a beautiful story. The rhyme and imagery is wonderful too! Very beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson
A story of blissful oblivion while sauntering in a place resembling Eden is described in bright imagery. The verse ends in a mellow gloom and sighs and slow goodbyes, a lovely write.
a perfect 10.........amazing imagery........a musical lore of special moments.........liked it best......suddenly comming back to harsh realities is really touching and painful.....
truly sweet, wonderful poem..loved it much...so beautiful rhymes painted a very vivid dreamy images..will put in my favorite She so fresh; dimpled an cute, full of life in her well worn suit. chitter and chatter we paced along Then she froze, we heard the gong A pause! …then a zip an thud. An arrow lands with a towed bud Inched we forward to the moat, hidden in the reeds, there a boat. With a beam she said I have to go As she slowly began to row Waved we sad an slow good byes Floated as she, away on my sighs Dark in the shadows a hooded form Click! I logged off, to stall the storm.
I like this one.. Thank you for sharing such good writings Alexia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 4:40:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Such a beautiful story you have created. I love the rhyme and the journey you took us on.