A Warm Smile Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Warm Smile

Rating: 4.7


Love has placed a smile on my face,
Lighting upon it the bright grace
Of heaven, my heart did embrace.
In me, tenderness comes in place
From the heart's core, where soft fire lays.
My heart, where my notes of love says
That the joy illumed in my fire's base
Will ever touch me to seek ways
Of tending this wondrous love's rays,
So uplifting, so I'll feel its trace
To my true love, where my heart stays.
That deemed for the rest of my days.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wenona Raysan Empedad 28 May 2009

seems like you were very in love when you wrote this.. i couldn't relate though, because i am very heart broken.. still i envy this poem.. i wish i could feel the same.. very nice.. expresses love in every way.. :)

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Sherif Monem 29 May 2009

Very beautiful sweet poem.

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Noha El3wdy 29 May 2009

i really enjoyed reading it. simple and touching

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

well I lost the girl who love me like crazy...and now i feel so lost...this is a nice write indeed..but bring backs bittersweet memories though...thanks sir

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Jasbir Chatterjee 31 May 2009

Wish you all the best, Obinna, I hope the warm smile remains on your face and the love you found also stays with you through your lifetime.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 December 2009

Smile says much ...’smile n’ profile’... Nice poem …10 MS. NIVEDITA UK

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Kylie Lowe 03 November 2009

very beautiful peice =]

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Anand Madhukar 11 September 2009

A gentle piece wrapped in a warm feeling of contentment.

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Vijay Gupta 15 August 2009

Good expression of love & passion. also read my new poem 'Keep the tears away'. Thanks a lot.

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James Mclain 07 July 2009

Warm smiles are made in heavan..to hold one is speacial..never let it go..iip

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