A Warning Poem by Not Long Left

A Warning

Rating: 5.0


Give me some pen and paper
and I will shower you with many a sweet verse,
give me a torrid tale,
and out of my poets purse-
I shall produce words of worth.
Allow me to sit in my little room,
and open my heart to strangers
But never
pluck my feathers of inspiration,
for I would never let you in again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

In this world today, I can understand why you would write (I'll never let you in again.) Great interesting write but I guess you would not ever elaborate on it to me! Is your mind and heart so unusual or do you just prefer not to explain? Its only life..........

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John Tiong Chunghoo 11 April 2006

england's future poet laureate!

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 31 December 2005

this was absolutely awesome...i love it...you get a 10 from me also! all my best-faith

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Cj Heck 17 December 2005

OhMyGod, you've just described how I feel about writing, Vincent. Excellent poem, wonderful thoughts expressed. Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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