nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A Whisper In The Venturesome Pilgrimage - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

I remember my golden school days.
An attractive girl and her toothy smile.
She gets angry sometimes
When I ask her what toothpaste she prefers.
Perhaps the time brings us to a standstill?
And I became a pupil in the life-school.
She looks after her children with all the burdens.
We met accidentally on a rainy day.
'Hey! You look like a whizz-kid.'
She told me with that toothy smile.
'Thank you Blossom' I replied.
'You still remember my name.'
'How can I forget a fragrant flower? '
'How are your wife and family? '
'I don't have that sort.'
'Still a bachelor? '
'Yes Madam.'
'I am a widow.' She whispered.
Then I felt like the whole world collapsed on me!


Comments about A Whisper In The Venturesome Pilgrimage by nimal dunuhinga

  • (10/15/2006 5:28:00 AM)

    Being able to see people beyond their out-side appearence, this is a very wise notion
    Love duncan X
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  • (10/14/2006 9:00:00 PM)

    I love your friend and her toothy smile and your way of using her story to get your message across. This is a warm tribute to all widows, and especially those widowed in war. It was also engaging to read. Bless you. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx (Report)Reply

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  • (10/13/2006 1:10:00 PM)

    Another interesting story told in your own unique style. Cheers for your rich imagination.

    Best wushes,

    Sandra
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  • (10/13/2006 10:39:00 AM)

    Just ask her about the tooth paste she uses again, that will get rid of her. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 13, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 16, 2010


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