A Window Of Time 3 Poem by Dave Alan Walker
A Window Of Time 3
I'm looking
out of the window
as I hear someone calling me
A young girl comes to the window
and says I'm your daughter Lily
from the year 2033
Your trapped in a coma
that's why you see
images through a window
that looks as real as me
Your in a coma like dream
Inventing the world you see
just waiting to wake up in the year 2033
Did you really think
You was writing poetry
Did you think
it came from your mind
I'm by your side
at your hospital bed
waiting for a sign
Truely amazing poem...! ! ! Great thoughts and well written..! !
Wow. Wonderful poem. You are in coma like dream....Waiting for a sign..Brilliant write. No words can describe...
I am envious of your talent a brilliant write I will be going back to read all three again
your in a coma like dream inventing the world you see. a good write
Another good one Dave; an amazing and wonderful story you have spun for us...thanks!
Dave, here at number 3, I wasn't expecting the ending although it does make sense as per the cycle of life and alternation of generation. As a series of poems it also reminds me a bit of the great British TV show Life on Mars, which is a good thing. Thanks for the journey.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:02:19 AM # 1.0.0
I've read all the parts of 'A window of time' and this one reminds of someone who has gone through intensive care ordeal, abandoned by everyone... Can poetry bring relief to people who experience these things? Would they be pleased if they read few verses devoted to them? Thank you for the heartfelt read...