Sandra Fowler
W. Columbia, WV, USA
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A Wisp Of Smoke

Rating: 5.0
The moon falls March white on old sycamores,
As good-bye as the glitter of a tear.
Warmth is a word too fragile to be said,
Love fey blue as a wisp of winter smoke.

The glamor is almost intangible,
Vision a whisper of its former self.
You clasp my hand to still the fleeting mood.
I promise you I will not close my eyes.

Copyright,2009, Sandra Fowler
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COMMENTS
nomad omnia 02 August 2009
No two-ways about it - this is genius. N
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Catrina Heart 31 May 2009
wonderful imagery......richly poetic words!
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Blue Eyes 10 April 2009
wow, this poem is amazing i really like it.
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Surayya Abbas 09 April 2009
a beautifull creation. lovely style
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T McH 05 April 2009
S, you are a poetic genius. I don't know why, but this brings tears to my eyes. Really so. And in the 'I don't know why' lies your genius, I guess. t x
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C. P. Sharma 02 April 2009
Sandra, Your at your best in imagery and rhytm in your successive poems. Your soul speaks through them and I feel exorted when I read them. With chage in season the birds migrate, Bid adieu to chill, find spring to celebrate. In life seasons come and go, Life bird to them doesn't bow. Why we be the victim of Time! Why not enjoy the eternal rhyme! Ever your friend, CP
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Luis Gil 28 March 2009
There are many more poems to be written, Sandra. Glamor and warmth are 'misused' words and you know their meaning, Sandra. Shine on.
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Alison Cassidy 27 March 2009
There is such delicacy in this piece, Sandra - translucent is the word that comes to mind. You take an ordinary picture and imbue it with such subtlety and finesse, it becomes extraordinary. But then your work is always extraordinary and timeless in its power to enchant this reader. Love, Alison ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Wojja Fink 27 March 2009
warmth is a word to fragile to be said...almost to beautiful so..warmest thanks for sharing....John
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Andrew Blakemore 26 March 2009
A beautifully written piece Sandra, the first line is truly fantastic, wonderful imagery. Best wishes, Andrew x
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