About Eric Poem by jerry hughes

About Eric

Rating: 5.0


There is a similarity about them.
Eric, and my father.
Quiet men, who went about their lives
doing well for others.
Gentle men, who didn't seek rewards,
the doing would suffice.

When I talk with Eric,
memories of my father come flooding back.
The timbre of his voice,
an occasional gesture,
the size and shape of him.
I look forward to those moments joyously,
sometimes sadly.

My father's passing?
An unfathomable void.
To Eric, I repeat the words I spoke
the night my father died.
'Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.'


Eric Smith, friend and mentor, died on
January 4,2006 aged 92

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fred Babbin 18 May 2008

Very nice eulogy. It does touch.

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Subbaraman N V 16 November 2007

A fine tribute to a beloved father! We feel his absence! But none can help! God's ways are mysterious!

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David Harris 15 October 2007

Jerry I will repeat what Robert Howard has said before me. This a great tribute that honours both your father and Eric at the same time. Wonderful write my friend and thanks for sharing it. David

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Elle Thomas 14 October 2007

it sort of paints a picture. tell me it must have been nice to have someone to remind you of another who was gone. how did you feel when you wrote this? remembering and feeling they are treasures to be locked deep down for safe keeping and taken out to air especially when one loses thier sunshine.

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Robert Howard 18 August 2007

A great tribute that honors your father and friend at the same time. The language and form are in perfect harmony and the impression is very clear and very strong.

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Simone Inez Harriman 05 November 2015

Beautifully, sadly penned. Thank you for sharing this exceptional poem Jerry.

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Mandi June 09 April 2013

A perfect way to remember a dear friend and companion. Eloquent and proudly written. Well done, Mr. Hughes.

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Patrick A. Martin 06 November 2009

Here's to two good men and another good man that remembers them.

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Jacqui Thewless 03 September 2009

Well done. 'And death shall have no dominion..' Well done, indeed.

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Emancipation Planz 22 May 2008

About..... yes.. irony here yet these are such encouraging spirited words 'rage, rage.....' and with it may apprehension dissipate.. I await your next write... meanwhile.. may you swallow and medicate on Peace filled calmness as your journey continues this week, aroha

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