Absences Poem by Rani Turton

very sad, but also beautiful...as if like took away a good deal of what you should still have but in nature u can find solace...really enjoyed alot 10/10

There is a river that flows through the land Its banks are full of plants and sand ---------------- From confusion and torture come the light

heart still craves for the dusts of own, as when splashes the mind by rippling river and yet mellowed green as when bessorted grin memoirs still nostalgic by the memory haunting the pages of memorabilia.....of halcyon days, wonderful imagery by the life in a limited world, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing wishing its gleams of nature memors still bestirs

Yeah that is where we long to be where we enjoy our loneliness. A nice write...............I enjoyed it.

I like the images your use to convey emotion in this poem. I also noticed how the reader is subtly guided into a place of hope at the end. Very nicely executed. Much enjoyed. Shirley

These absences touch so secretly our presence.10.

I understand so much Rani. What a beautiful poem. Life has a way of stripping us of the things we find comfort in sometimes, doesn't it. Nobody goes through it unscathed. Big Hug for this one Ruthy

A nice poem on absences, well composed with nice imagery. My 10 added to it.

pain, agony, loneliness-we have to bear alone. it is at such times when the void becomes unbearable, we discover, we were chasing what was never there. then transformation occurs, and you connect to yourself and his all prevading Presence. a lovely, sad but honest poem 10+

excellent write, so much to ponder upon